The qualities that make someone admirable
In our developed society, besides wealth and power, people also desire to gain more admiration from others which considered essential thing that makes themselves more valuable and attractive. Most people assume that good appearance and nice possession can make an admirable person. But it is not simple as a cover. In this essay, I will analyze what qualities that make an person admirable.
Firstly, morality is one of the crucial qualities that can makes a person admirable. Morality can be demonstrated by kind acts such as helping each others, empathy with vulnerability or treating well others, etc. Showing that we are a moral person is persuading we are an admirable person because we prove that we are helpful to society which makes people believe in us and our working.
Secondly, having a good reputation is of the fastest and effective ways that makes people admire us. Nevertheless, having a good reputation is not easy at all. That is a process require large effort and consistency. Being prestigious and professional in working, having a respectable personality, and having a substantial success are some conditions that make a good reputation. Apparently, gaining a nice reputation is extremely difficult therefore if someone has it, he or she will be really an admirable person.
Last but not least, an accomplished people usually get more admiration from others. Obviously, having some talents is really advantageous that can help us have people’s attentions and idolatry. A talented people can become a famous person by using their accomplishments to participate in entertainment industry, which is the effective way to get famous. Moreover, accomplished people easy to get admiration from people because they help satisfy the people’s needs for entertainment.
In conclusion, people can get admiration not only by their appearances and possessions but also by the inside qualities. That can be morality, good reputation and accomplishment. Each of some qualities above is not easy to obtain, but it can be gained by the endeavor and cultivating day by day. It is hard to be come an admirable person but once we get it we are indeed deserving to be admirable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22662889518 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09701569765 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507082152975 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7563168874 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248640201628 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773752807549 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710178424289 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147129025873 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686887074356 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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