Nowadays, jeans are considered to be the most popular type of clothes in the USA. Many people wear jeans every day. What part does this type of garment play in American culture? Discuss this point of view and give your personal opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Jeans and America are synonymous to each other . Jeans are a perfect expression of the American dream . They are simple to put on and offer great comfort to the person who wears it . It was basically made to assist the early farmer s of the United States to till their land without damaging the knees. Since then it has changed color, style, form and features and has integrated itself into the American way of life . I believe jeans are cultural roots of the United States and it is the soul of the American dream .
Firstly, jeans are designed to offer various features besides, comfort to the legs and buttocks. It is quite hard and durable , so can be used in any •1eather under any circumstance . The clothing material is quite rigid and cannot be torn easily . The design of the cloth for jeans is accurate to suit every American 's dream - to be an adventurer .A perfect example of this would be my friend, James ' adventures in the Rocky Mountains . He uses a pair of Levi's 1920s iconic slim fit jeans. Whenever he engages in activities like rock climbing or forest exploration. The jeans, according to him provides the proper cushion to sit on rocky mountainous surf aces at ease. Also, in case of harmful weather the his jeans protect his thighs and other organs from damage .
Secondly, jeans are designed to enhance the exterior beauty of a person . They lend an extra aura of stylishness, elegance with a touch of the pastoral pride . They represent the step-by-step progress of the American culture over centuries. Each layer of design highlights the generational and cultural change in different aspect s of life like music and fashion . For example, in the 1960s and 70s, with the advent of pop music and musical icons like Elvis Presley, American wore the iconic Bell bottom jeans . Today, in the 21st century, ripped jeans are a sensation in the States . They represent the ever-evolving trends in the modern American society .
I sincerely believe that jeans and America are inseparable companions . They share a history together and the bond is deep-rooted . It is said and I believe that without jeans America will lose its cultural diversity and identity. Jeans have carved out for themselves a place in America ' s heart and will be their go-to dress always, under any situation .
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Suggestion:
... without jeans America will lose its cultural diversity and identity. Jeans...
^^
Line 9, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ica will lose its cultural diversity and identity. Jeans have carved out ...
^^
Line 9, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will lose its cultural diversity and identity. Jeans have carved out for ...
^^
Line 9, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cultural diversity and identity. Jeans have carved out for themselves a pl...
^^
Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al diversity and identity. Jeans have carved out for themselves a place in...
^^
Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and identity. Jeans have carved out for themselves a place in America s h...
^^^
Line 9, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... identity. Jeans have carved out for themselves a place in America s heart ...
^^
Line 9, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eans have carved out for themselves a place in America s heart and will be ...
^^
Line 9, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut for themselves a place in America s heart and will be their go-to dress al...
^^
Line 9, column 368, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... go-to dress always, under any situation .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84223918575 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58209031676 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554707379135 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6338229449 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.12 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.72 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 133.0 5.01903807615 2650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187326006793 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496979616915 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425397067797 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110274234394 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114930233614 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.