In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In modern era, most of people in several nations consider living independently because of the advantage, managing their money properly. However, the immense drawback of this decision is to suffer from a mental issue.
Regarding the positive point, today, this decision of some in various countries to be a lonely settler may aware of the saving accounts, say, the living cost. The root why this exists because of the undesired daily outcomes, pursuing to allocate the emergency fund. According to Jakartapost.com in 2018, 60% of workers in Indonesia settling individually tended to manage their salaries to cope with accidental needs, such as medical care at most. Meanwhile, the rest who did not prepare that might be able to spend it extravagantly, impacting to not survive when the bad worse incident would be real, becoming poor.
Turning to the opposite one, if they are keen on this option, the miserable effect being originated will possibly struggle with an anxiety problem, one of the most faced is depression. As the reason, this occurs due to being a loner, who rarely do they interact to community. Finland, a state which is well-known because of the independent society, its citizens do like to live alone, but BBC news’ fact said that the mental illness rate of male and female was 50% of the total population, depressed by expending time without others, whom they actually require buddies to talk with. In addition, men stood out 30% more risk suffering from this such illness.
To conclude, choosing to be an independent settler means that one should face the mental health problem, being depressed, albeit an advantage offered is to have ability to ranged basic day-outcomes. It will be better to measure our own phycology prior to stay lonesome in far-away places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
In modern era, most of people in several nations consider living inde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06779661017 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70185865995 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4172595919 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.583333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123220534256 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044673007913 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427834377248 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683825773567 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029404092235 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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