Write a letter to yourself (posted as a status on your personal facebook), showing a commitment or resolution you make for yourself.
Dear Future Me,
Let the wind blow away your sorrows
Let people see your faithfulness
And let people appreciate you just by the way you are.
I hope you will promise to concentrate more on your next targets and always stay optimistic about what is going to happen in the future. Do not afraid of failure and mistakes because confront troubles or pressures are part of your journey to living a better life.
Do not lose your hope, do not feel that you were born to ease pain, do not be depressed, and do not underestimate yourself.
You can never know your endless power inside your little soul. A determined mind can make a huge change and have deeply affected what is going to be faced: your fears, your weaknesses,and your drawbacks.
Keep moving forward, keep living life as you have only one last chance to live.
Today will be the best day for you to make promise with yourself about your next intentions.
One last thing but most importantly, love and respect yourself and others more. Live your life being you. I strongly believe that the future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. I always believe in you. Stay strong myself!
Yours sincerely,
Ngoc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...to be faced: your fears, your weaknesses,and your drawbacks. Keep moving forwa...
^^^^
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...strong myself! Yours sincerely, Ngoc
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37542692189 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3458421928 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0769230769 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226877904432 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869797674593 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563480057051 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991169058614 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058383335337 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.