Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about current events. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are a plethora of news outlets for readers to wander in search of captivating content thanks to the advance in technology. A number of people believe that newspapers is superior to counterparts in terms of delivering current events to the inhabitants whereas, others opine the opposite point of view. From my own perspective, despite indispensable position of magazine in our society, people can legitimately learn news better through other media.
On the one hand, individuals who advocate the former sentiment may corroborate their opinion with newsprint’s distraction-free advantage. Apparently enough, paper serve one sole purpose, which is providing up-to-date and scrupulous information. Consequently, the outlay is extremely simple with separated singular-theme-focused columns and specially designed to drive human’s attention to content. Additionally, since journal ought to undergo rigorous editing and prolonged time of writing and editing prior to being published, it guarantees supreme experiences upon reading with flawless writing style and non-sensationalist headlines.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the pervasiveness of relentless interruption from social media or personal communication, the privileges of online news platform significantly outweigh the drawbacks. The first conspicuous merit is pertinent to various function available on publishing outlets. Online media enables an individual to watch videos, listen to audio, cross-reference sources, consult primary sources and therefore have an objective and overall view about a particular piece of news. Moreover, we can passively take in events via media. To illustrate, in the past, we had to actively search for information but now we can simultaneously execute different tasks while listening to radio to elicit breaking news.
In conclusion, though the ascendancy of newspaper is irreplaceable, the efficacy of it pale into comparison with media platform regarding of informing reader with hot events
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02090592334 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49607772483 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693379790941 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7130227965 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.923076923 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23496739243 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702851239845 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081530406233 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129820078418 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113486681977 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.