People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who often change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that shifting jobs may bring less satisfaction at work than having stable employment. To a certain extent, I agree with this idea. However, I believe workers who often explore a range of different career paths could be happy at work in their own way.
To begin, I would agree that switching careers can lead to stress. Learning a lot of new things, adjusting with colleagues, and adapting to a new working environment in a short amount of time may be incredibly challenging. Indeed, if there is too much to absorb, people may quickly burn out. Moreover, individuals might just become unemployed as a result of a career shift. Hence, they are unable to enjoy their job as they don’t have one.
On the other hand, I also think that enjoyment can increase during the changing occupation process. First, a person's decision to leave their current employment is often determined by a perceived lack of chances to use their skills. Clearly, people want to improve their abilities, and if their current job does not allow them to do so, they will search for one that does. It is believed that having more opportunities leads to higher job satisfaction and future promotion. In addition, it takes time and experience to know which job suits and resonates with each person. Different job requires different skills and characteristics, so trying a variety of positions allows employees to recognize their strengths so that they can use them to work more effectively.
In conclusion, how one person receives a satisfying working life may differ from that of another. I believe employees can be happy with their jobs, whether they change them frequently or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93950177936 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77172800958 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1078570916 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255330115437 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750046190108 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415281772304 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15114571639 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557257888283 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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