Some people say now there is less communication between family members than in the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe that today, there is less intimate relationship between family members. I personally agree with this idea and discuss my reasons in the following.
As for some reasons, firstly, nowadays, people have more hectic lifestyle than in the past. As a matter of fact, in the modern world, in most families, both man and female spend more time at work either to lift their lifestyle or make their ends meet. In addition, children also spend a time almost six to eight hours in school to be educated. Beside, in the present era, a wide range of entertaining media such as television and social media have been developed to make people’s leisure time amusing and enjoyable. In fact, in most occasions, people especially youngsters prefer scrolling on such media instead of catching up with their parents or siblings.
Nevertheless, a few people oppose with the above idea. To support their side, they mention that in the sophisticated world, internet has widened out our communication. The main reason is that family members are able to keep in touch with their loved ones even in case, they live far away from them. Although this might be true to some extent, people are not able to make a strong intimacy with each other. In fact, according to some evidence, people are not able to make others to understand their feeling via internet. To explain clearly, people should talk with each other face to face to express their feeling.
To conclude, although recently, people are able to socialize with their family members in an eye flash as the internet and social media, in my opinion, the communication is not that much efficient. I personally think family members should spend their leisure time with each other to be more closer to each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'face to'.
Suggestion: face to
...rly, people should talk with each other face to face to express their feeling. To conclude, a...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...heir leisure time with each other to be more closer to each other.
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Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... other to be more closer to each other.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, as for, in addition, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55516643605 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9191308433 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169102579085 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626135976602 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550313838427 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113938922863 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325119132677 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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