The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK 2000 2010

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...were employed in three sectors in the UK,over a ten-year period 2000-2010.What stands...
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...the UK,over a ten-year period 2000-2010.What stands out from the graph is that there...
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...eople who employed in the private sector,while the figures for the public and self-emp...
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...d in question. Looking at the details,the share of people in the public sector re...
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...e at about 38% in the first three years.After that there was a considerable rise to j...
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...e at about 38% in the first three years.After that there was a considerable rise to j...
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...siderable rise to just under 50%in 2004.Despite falling to by around 5%,but the figure ...
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...d slightly to approximately 51% in 2010.This meant that It had the highest rate of t...
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... rate of the three sectors in that year.The share of self-employed sector was in a ...
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...-employed sector was in a similar trend.The trend witnessed a fluctuation between 1...
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...and 21% in the first half of the decade.After the percentage had rose remarkably,it l...
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...After the percentage had rose remarkably,it levelled off in the last two years. ...
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...ff in the last two years. By contrast,the share of people in the private sector s...
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...ted at the highest point of 48% in 2000.In 2002,the proportion declined markedly t...
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...h point it levelled off until next year.Following this,there was a steady decrease over t...
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...elled off until next year.Following this,there was a steady decrease over the second h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, second, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.100456621 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00482296165 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 22.4926829268 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.386656004 43.030603864 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 372.333333333 112.824112599 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.0 22.9334400587 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266686388435 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180753110296 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100545652907 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180753110296 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100545652907 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.1 13.2329268293 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 61.2550243902 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 10.3012195122 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.9970731707 284% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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