The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy in the UK,2000-2010.
The line graph illustrates data about the percentage of people who were employed in three sectors in the UK,over a ten-year period 2000-2010.What stands out from the graph is that there was a downward trend in the proportion of people who employed in the private sector,while the figures for the public and self-employed sectors experienced an upward trend over the period in question.
Looking at the details,the share of people in the public sector remained stable at about 38% in the first three years.After that there was a considerable rise to just under 50%in 2004.Despite falling to by around 5%,but the figure then recovered in 2008,after which the proportion increased slightly to approximately 51% in 2010.This meant that It had the highest rate of the three sectors in that year.The share of self-employed sector was in a similar trend.The trend witnessed a fluctuation between 18% and 21% in the first half of the decade.After the percentage had rose remarkably,it levelled off in the last two years.
By contrast,the share of people in the private sector started at the highest point of 48% in 2000.In 2002,the proportion declined markedly to roughly 41%,at which point it levelled off until next year.Following this,there was a steady decrease over the second half of the period to reach its trough of 20% in 2010
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.100456621 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00482296165 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 22.4926829268 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.386656004 43.030603864 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 372.333333333 112.824112599 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.0 22.9334400587 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266686388435 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180753110296 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100545652907 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180753110296 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100545652907 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.1 13.2329268293 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 61.2550243902 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 10.3012195122 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.9970731707 284% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.