Some people believe that extreme sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary epoch, there is a conundrum among the folks whether action sports should be outlawed by countries or not. My view points are not at the same wavelength. I shall portray my viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs.
A myraid of points can be considered to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, putting restrictions on adventurous games could be extremely disappointing for players of such games along with spectators. To demonstrate, great prestigious along with money has been earned by numerous players such as The Great Khali (wrestling), Ken block ( car racing), Jeb coreless sky driver) in dangerous games. Consequently, prohibition on such games not only destroy the career of already eminent players but also affects the future of young emerging players. Therefore, the idea of putting restrictions on such games doesn't deserves appreciation.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. To commence with, these games provides a platform to both players and a nation to earn profusely. To make it clear, massive number of people travel from one nation to another to watch adventurous sports. Therefore, they bring hard currency with them and spend it on accommodation, eating ectera. As a result,as these games are nature centric so these not put any pressure on government to establish stadiums. Thence, government may lose opportunity to earn revenue if these games are banned by nations.
To recapitulate, although dangerous games has few demerits, yet the benefits of this games cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29508196721 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97754292865 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647540983607 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8529993122 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0723167818453 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231710453189 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341325338698 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047068008111 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212159436021 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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