The environment problems facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation . Government and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is certainly true that the issue related to environmental pollution have become one of the most controversial issues nowadays, and every nation is wondering about how to tackle the problem. many people think that this problem can be reduced by government for creating certain measurement, but I partially agree with this problems because this can be controlled by government as well as all citizen. This essay will be analyzed with reasonable evidence.
To begin with, government should take more taxes of vehicle, because of nowadays air pollution is created by vehicle emissions. It can be clarify that if government should carry more taxes on vehicle, then less people prefer to buy new product and travelled by public transport. Secondly, all company should create a law of their worker mandatory prefer by company' s bus rather than personal vehicle. For example, Honda company created this law and their worker should compulsory prefer from their home any company by company's bus. Overall, Government should manage by improving tax and company should create rules regarding worker travelling.
However, this problem is not only solved by government but also importantly a citizen. Firstly, all the citizen can prefer to travel by bicycle and walking in short distance. this can be useful to reduce air pollution. For example, almost 75% Canadian people generally prefer to travel by bicycle in short distance. Apart from this, citizen should plantation of 5 - 10 plant on their basement which can be helped to manage of environmental effect. All in all, people of the specific country also responsible to reduce air pollution for travel by walk and bicycle in shorter distance and grow a plant on their basement, which can reduce air pollution.
In Recapitulation, this problem is not only solved by government and companies but also important citizen of their country to travel by walk and bicycle, and grow plant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in short, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17307692308 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7278545747 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50641025641 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8500653929 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230363085211 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908776338139 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518366452744 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141344006379 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426042809239 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.