The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram gives information about the average amount of rainfall monthly in Australia the previous year while the line graph illustrates that of Australia for the last 4 decades.
Overall, the two graphs followed quite the same pattern, however, the column chart seemed to have a downward tendency while there is an opposite trend in line graph.
As can be seen from the data, up to about 70mm of rain fell in January and this source also was the top charted in last year, followed by that of march and February with around 65 mm and 60 mm, respectively. Nevertheless, from April to October, the average rainfall witnessed several oscillations ranging between a highest of 39mm in May and a lowest of 5mm in both August and October. Despite rising again in November to 40mm, the amount of rainfall was still lower than that of January.
Turning to the average total of rainfall through last 40 years, notwithstanding constituting the highest data in January with 80mm in total, the number progressively declined from that time on to September and reached the lowest of 10mm approximately before growing to 50mm through October to December
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ed several oscillations ranging between a highest of 39mm in May and a lowest of ...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ng between a highest of 39mm in May and a lowest of 5mm in both August and Octobe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, nevertheless, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9381443299 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71871913475 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3904219738 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.666666667 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256028366013 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116824231018 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136476705801 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158143967913 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153013478627 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.