All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been said that governments should pay all the cost of education and healthcare for everyone, and these facilities should be free of charge for individuals. I firmly disagree with this statement and I will elaborate on my reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, a free scholarship should be a reward for the best students. Free education decreases the competitive spirit among students. The tuition fee of universities and postgraduate degrees should be based on the score and the ability of students. Governments can allocate a scholarship for the best students because in that way, trainers try much harder to gain the highest level of qualifications to gain this scholarship, and other students should pay the cost of their training. In addition, students who are not successful to be eligible for this bonus can find their interest in some other skills such as trade jobs. For example, a student who has lower average scores can focus on learning some unrelated to university skills such as woodworking.
Furthermore, unlimited free access to healthcare centres would increase the rate of non-emergency hospital visits. If the hospitals become free, people will visit doctors even for unnecessary problems such as a common cold. Private insurance companies are providing some plans for individuals’ healthcare which help them to overcome the cost of their hospitalization. In these programmes, sometimes governments allocate a certain amount of budget on patients suffering from special ailments such as cancer. In that way, particular patients are covered by outstanding insurance provided by governments which is free, while others are covered by private insurance companies. Such a scheme would let governments spend much more money on some infrastructures which directly elevates the quality of people’s lives.
However, some people believe if governments refuse to pay the cost of these facilities, many people would be deprived of them. By motivating students to do better and addressing the needed patients, governments can save money.
In conclusion, I personally believe that free education should be proposed to the best students , and free healthcare services should be provided for some particular patients by governments.
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50143266476 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10494536414 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52435530086 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5608603336 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.941176471 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298762270409 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101955997215 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907701909108 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196850578954 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882206580117 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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