Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Nowadays, this is a popular trend that the immigration of a huge number of dwellers into cities. This issue exerts several impacts on residents’ public space, leading to some suggestions for the officials to tackle it.
To begin with, the situation of overpopulation in metropolitans pushes the infrastructural system into its limit. Specifically, the present of overcrowded employees going to work at rush hours in a day allows traffic congestion to widespread. Consequently, not only does it waste many hours to commute, but also the environment pollution is accelerated by superfluous duration of active internal combustion. Additionally, this circumstance forms a medical shortage, due to the deficiency of medical practitioners, which cannot meet the demand of all residents in large scale. Indeed, the need for healthcare services of good quality in gigantic cities can hardly be fulfilled, preventing citizens to access to them.
With two aforementioned problems, I suggest two solutions to tackle each corresponding section. Regarding to transportation, it is necessary that governments should impose proper policies on building workplaces far from the heart of the city, which, in turn, reduces the pressure of high density in specific areas. In the long term, the municipal officials should proactively improve the medical systems to enhance its coverage above all areas, allowing their residents to approach these services when needed.
In conclusion, there are indeed various repercussions regarding to the negative influence of overpopulation upon the urban place, they can be effectively coped with the adaptation of effective policies and administrative measures.
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicle outweigh disadvantages 84
- Nowadays sport is becoming a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and a lot of companies have involved in financially and in other ways What are the advantages and disadvantages 78
- Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents Others however believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- In their advertising businesses nowadays emphasise that their products are new in some way Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 84
- In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about history of the house or building they live in what are reasons for this How can people research this 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7171314741 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33288304552 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693227091633 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7850698262 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978122397678 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335561478259 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398758644853 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558914799074 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244201869983 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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