People are surrounded by advertising, which has increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?
Advertising has become more and more popular in society, it appears everywhere whether on the street, square or in the TV, youtube, facebook…gradually, advertisements have become a part of our lives. In my opinion, although advertisements have some benefits, the detrimental effects of ads overpower the beneficial ones.
It is undeniable that advertising plays some significant roles in modern commercial society. Firstly, consumers are offered some products’ information that help them to know the price or function of those items they want to buy. Finally, advertisement creates more job employment opportunities. With the popularity of advertisements, we can see more creative job roles. Unemployed can find some jobs to earn money.
However, some downsides of advertisements cannot be neglected. To begin with, there are many deceptive advertisings on social networks. In order to boost sales, some sellers use advertisements to deceive customers in terms of price, quantity and quality of their products. This can lead to the customer’s trust being reducing. Secondly, advertising creates confusion among buyers. With the same thing, but there are two ads that convey different information. The buyers will be confused as to which one to believe. Thirdly, people’s emotions are affected. Advertisements are excessive recently, which leads to annoyance among the society. Not all people have a positive look at advertising. They think that advertisements are annoying because they are woken up by a silly ad while sleeping or watching youtube.
To sum up, advertising brings both advantages and disadvantages in daily life, but in my opinion, their drawbacks have an outweigh impact on people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...but in my opinion, their drawbacks have an outweigh impact on people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, as to, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59230769231 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35022740551 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665384615385 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.117695533 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5263157895 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6842105263 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164610176309 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450839079304 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332202223012 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857833497189 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047283483009 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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