These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, more men choose to stay at home to take care of their children while their spouses become the breadwinners of the family. In my perspective, this trend is due to/ could be attributed to some reasons and I think it is a positive development.
In the past, women are expected to be housewives who stay home to take care of their families and their husbands are the ones to make a living. However, in recent times, the opinion of people towards the role of men and women in a family has been changed. Both men and women are equally responsible for their families and they could choose which role they want to take on in families. Therefore, it is normal for wives to gain qualifications and pursue a career. Also, it is socially acceptable for men to opt for staying at home and taking care of the housework.
I am of the belief that this is a positive development as it promotes gender equality in families. Both men and women could join hands to build their families in the ways that they want regardless of barriers of who is supposed to take the role of breadwinners or taking care of the housework. Furthermore, on a larger scale, women in society would have equal opportunities to pursue the jobs that they want instead of being forced into being housewives. Without being put under pressure to sacrifice their career, women could gain success in their careers just like any other man.
In summary, the shift in society views towards the role of men and women in families has led to such development and I consider it to be a positive one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... home and taking care of the housework. I am of the belief that this is a positi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57857142857 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62654230687 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478571428571 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0938347322 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296732837781 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120135982681 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808368614311 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202429296594 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107422938283 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.