Some people have choice that different to spend time with one or two close friends, other choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choose. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific to support your answer.
All of people have choice that different to spend their time. Some people prefer to spent time with one or two close, because they get feeling enjoy when they are hangout with friend really close with they or have same hobby. And the other people prefer to spent time with a large number of friends, they are have reason that they will get togetherness when they are hangout with many close friends. However, both of them have advantages, we can prefer with who we can spend time suitable with your conscience. In the following paragraphs I will analyze both of them, and I will give reasons to support my opinion.
On the other side, spent time with large number of friends have benefit, we can get togetherness. For examples, I have many friends. We often invest time together like hangout in cafe, swimming together, and play foot-stall. I got feeling enjoy when I play with their, and we be more close and we become close friends. Above all, we become to know meaning togetherness.
On the other side, people who choose to spend time with one or two close have reasons, they are easier to meet just little person than must wait many people, and then they prefer just one or two friends who have same hobby or thinking. For instance, two people have same hobby, hunt food is their hobby, if they go with a large number of friends, and they are hard to manage of time because they must wait many people who have different activities. And they cannot talk about private problems.
In conclusion, spent time with one or a large numbers of friends have different benefit. When we invest time with one or two close friend, we can get easily to manage time and we can talk about private of problems. In any case, we can get togetherness when we spend time with a large number of friends. So, I think we can compare if we want to get advantages of them.
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All of people have choice that different to spend their time
All of people have choices that are different to spend their time
Sentence: Some people prefer to spent time with one or two close, because they get feeling enjoy when they are hangout with friend really close with they or have same hobby.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and spent
Description: The fragment feeling enjoy when is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace enjoy with verb, past tense
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to with and they
Sentence: And the other people prefer to spent time with a large number of friends, they are have reason that they will get togetherness when they are hangout with many close friends.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and spent
Sentence: However, both of them have advantages, we can prefer with who we can spend time suitable with your conscience.
Description: The word who is not usually used as a WH-pronoun, accusative
Suggestion: Refer to who
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to time and suitable
Sentence: I got feeling enjoy when I play with their, and we be more close and we become close friends.
Description: The fragment feeling enjoy when is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace enjoy with verb, past tense
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a comma
Suggestion: Refer to their and ,
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.281 4.7
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.578 0.50
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