Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Environmental issues always are hot topics for each countries all over the world. And to solve environmental problem also are very difficult for individual. While there are some people believe that individual can do something to solve these problem.
It is true that nowadays solving environmental problem is too hard for individuals. They can not do anything without hearing government directives. Because the government have enough power to operate the protecting environmental campaign, in a highest position, they will have responsibility for dealing with problem of environment. Morover, they can promote factories to product more and more solar energy, wind energy and even if sun energy, after that they can encourage citizen to use alternative energy instead of using regularly energy. In addition, the government also can reduce the trash from the factories by giving some laws to forcing company to obey the inviromental laws. So the government easily solve problem more than individuals.
On the other hands, the government could not deal with completely environmental issue if they do not have the support of individuals. Individuals also solve the problems of environment by take action from little things. Firstly, they can protect environment by reducing use plastic bags to store food, instead, they use compostable bags. Secondly, they can limit throw trash into the streets or rivers, when they see trash on the roads they can easily take it and throw it into the rubbish, by this action the roads will become green and cleaner. Lastly, use to engage the green compaign to raise awareness's people, more and more people awareness about the problem of inviroment will help they have responsibilities for comunication
In conclusion, solving pollution environmental always is a big problem for both government and indivudual. To solve problem of environment, we need to spent long time for this, it is not just take one day or two days to deal with these issues. Both of government and indivudual have to support together to help the environment become better as possible.
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- In some cities of the world cars are replacing bicycles However in some other cities bicycles are replacing cars What are the reasons for these two developments In your opinion which one is better 83
- Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve Others believe individuals can also do some things to solve these problems Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...also are very difficult for individual. While there are some people believe that indi...
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Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...at individual can do something to solve these problem. It is true that nowadays solving e...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...e protecting environmental campaign, in a highest position, they will have respon...
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Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... will become green and cleaner. Lastly, use to engage the green compaign to raise a...
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Line 7, column 342, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...r to help the environment become better as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29041916168 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93408438187 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526946107784 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1100229758 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336733387624 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140076473593 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124895187567 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251484860116 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115740871217 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.