Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
One of the conspicuous trends in the modern-day is the presence of artificial intelligence. While many individuals delight when seeing that computers become smarter and more productive than humans, the rest still keep the vigilant perception. When it comes to me, I definitely advocate the prior school of thought by discussing both views of the issue.
To commence with, not only do modern citizens compete with others, they have to fight against computers as well as robots and artificial technology. Due to the high productivity and affordable expense, computer system emerges as formidable candidates in the marketplace. As the result, the unemployment rate is in a positive proportion with the development of technology, ending up millions of unemployees. Moreover, the application of machinery in various fields leads to the disappearance of craftsmen producing traditional products. For example, no matter how much people pay, they hardly find craft silk, pottery, or utensils in the marketplace.
In spite of those aforementioned propositions, technology in general and computer in particular play a vital role in the modern community. With the world population surpassing seven billion, without the support from artificial technology, people can not produce enough food, water, electricity, and other fundamental products to survive. Besides, the depletion of natural resources is another preponderant reason for the need for computers. New technology accompanies by the help of computers, not only facilitates our process of saving energy but also paves the way to the invention of other clean power. For instance, using artificial intelligence, people now can calculate more methods of producing electricity from wind, solar power, and plantation.
All in all, if all factors are contemplated, people, including me, can be easy to reach the conclusion that computers and their huge capacity are an extremely big help in human societies. People will soon adapt to the new world, where they only focus on enjoying life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 563, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...al products. For example, no matter how much people pay, they hardly find craft silk...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in general, in particular, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52564102564 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1224924193 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663461538462 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1485441177 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162561075726 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439249139356 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349607945261 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090057009523 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319490208162 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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