art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate turn their focus on science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage people to take interest in art
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%">Art has always played a vital role in enriching cultures all over the world. However,
people are showing less and less interest in art these days, instead of
concentrating on main sectors such as science, technology, and business.
Therefore, this essay will analyze reasons why this trend happens and suggest
possible ways to boost people’s interest in arts<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%"> While it is true that art enriches culture, it plays little or no role in improving our lives. People do not admire great
paintings or marvel at brilliant sculptures to live comfortably without money
and modern technologies that improve the quality of human life. obviously,
Science and technology which are focused on significantly bring huge benefits
for people. Both sectors providenumerous knowledge as well as countless job opportunities for humans.
Eventually, it will be very crucial and helpful for people in the future, if
they study scientific subjects such as artificial intelligence, machine
learning, and data analysis. Hence, an occupation that is related to technology
always guarantees a good salary. Besides, if people establish shops or companies
as well as become management or boss, they have a higher income than focusing
on art or taking part in exhibitions. For example, according to a practical
survey, the majority of people tend to choose jobs to focus on technology and
business more than relating to art<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%">Art is the backbone of our culture. Understandably, a Lack of interest in art will
eventually lead to the death of rich cultural heritage across the world. The
government should implement policies to revive the interest of young
generations in art. the authorities allocate a budget for developing the art
field by constructing art schools and maintaining art galleries. Organizing
cultural events will generate jobs for many and will attract many tourists. An
increase in the number of tourists will help generate more revenue. The better
financial prospects will act as a boost for people to pursue art as a passion
and a career option. For example, in Vietnam, the government invest the amount
of money in erecting art schools <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%">In conclusion, subjects such as science, technology, and business are lucrative in
terms of job prospects, but art too can be a source of livelihood. The combined
efforts of the government and the people are needed for the survival of art.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:107%"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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Suggestion: Obviously
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2622.0 1615.20841683 162% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.63797468354 5.12529762239 130% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.87161280138 2.80592935109 281% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572151898734 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9756946422 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.235294118 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 32.0 4.38176352705 730% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145578783119 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608464993988 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253935673463 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488046505589 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387182626185 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.53 12.4159519038 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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