You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor.
Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter:
Explain what the favor was
Describe how this favor helped you
Offer compensation
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sarah,
I hope you're doing well. I just want to thank you for all the duties you played in my absence.
As you know, pets are not allowed in airways due to some security reasons, and I have to leave my pets with you. Since, I am very
much aware about the fact that your parents don't like having pet in home. So, it's your kindness to keep my dog and cat
with you for a week.
I also tried many companies to take care of the animals in my absence, but those were charging very high. Thus, your this favor saved my lot of money
and assuring me for the safety of my dog and cat.
Words are not enough to express my gratitude towards you, so I plan to gave you a treat at your favorite restaurant as a
compensation. Also, we would a great time to spend together.
Looking forward to see you soon.
Yours truly,
Garm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Sarah, I hope youre doing well. I just want to thank you fo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., and I have to leave my pets with you. Since, I am very much aware about the fact ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...leave my pets with you. Since, I am very much aware about the fact that your pare...
^^^
Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... aware about the fact that your parents dont like having pet in home. So, its your k...
^^^^
Line 6, column 79, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...rents dont like having pet in home. So, its your kindness to keep my dog and cat ...
^^^
Line 10, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur this favor saved my lot of money and assuring me for the safety of my dog and...
^^
Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...e to spend together. Looking forward to see you soon. Yours truly, Garm.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24844720497 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07285981452 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689440993789 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.529291838 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1818181818 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278995183203 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108535487046 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653881603248 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114503086149 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797555313275 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.