Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past.
Causes and solutions?
now a days, communication between the people is totally vanished when compare to olden days.Young adults now a days are lacking humbleness and regard in their conversation when contrast with older citizens.this essay will focus briefly on the reasons and suitable suggestions .
Firstly, i would like to explain the various causes for the teens to behave disobidient in nature.The primary major reason would be the lack of moral education to the childrens since thier school days.Knowledge which has thought during childhood plays an vital role in personality development.The secondary reason for being less polite and respectful would be the parents who are just letting their youngers isolated from society .hence could not communicate with variety of people. last but not least reason would be defined as drastic change in advance technology which is leading adults to get isolated and less polite,respectfull.For instance ,younger citizens from the childhood to teenage could not learn the education of respect and obidience.Beyond this they are just tucked to their mobile phones for making good friends,updating their views on social applications like facebook,twitter and whatsapp.
Secondly,i would like to show intrest on the suitable suggestions for the above discussed problems .it is the primary responsibilty of school management to ensure the classes for motivation of moral values in childrens.Secondly the parents should feel responsible for this issue and for instance, should take their adults to some social gatherings,family occasions such that they could aware about the skills which they need to have to socialise themselve.Finally teens should restrict their time towards internet ,further they can have thier time for the family and develop their communicating ability.
To summarise,from the above discussion it is vivid that less polite and respect in youngers should be corrected by training them right from the infancy to aduloscence.it is also the duty of the guardians to guide them in a way of growing with good charachters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54430379747 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31475648943 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585443037975 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.884444368 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 350.4 106.682146367 328% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.2 20.7667163134 304% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123243614392 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743780397872 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443518235351 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754461224325 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468364209599 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 13.0946893788 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.93 50.2224549098 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.74 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.56 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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