Big companies should invest in sports and local facilities. Agree or disagree?
Every industry is seen striving hard to gain success in life. It is commonly asserted by some proponents that companies ought to spend money on sports events and social amenities. I concur with the above mentioned ideology to some extent. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will enunciate my views.
As far as my views are concerned, I believe that large corporative bodies must expend on organizing sports events as they have huge funds to sponsor different teams at national levels ensuing to gain name and fame. Another noteworthy aspect is that these companies should construct public places like gardens, parks and playgrounds in order to make people blessing at large. Lastly, a fair amount of remuneration should invest by the companies to construct sports complexes and well fare societies for the betterment of the residents so that they can survive on this planet earth conveniently.
On the opposite side, I opine that there are some other significant areas where big organizations should invest their money. The predominant one is that they ought to expand their businesses in other nations by providing alluring salary packages to the newly employed workers. On top of it, companies should render promotions, perks and bonuses to their employees in order to recognize their contribution and efforts for the success of the company. Last but not least, companies should construct more branches in order to render employment opportunities to the unemployed people in order to vanish poverty, unemployment and crime from the country.
In the epilogue, I would reckon that big companies should adopt a sagacious approach towards utilization of their funds on games and local facilities by not keeping aside the importance of other sectors in order to gain holistic growth with resplendent walk of life.
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...holistic growth with resplendent walk of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25773195876 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79852550811 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9348900221 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249666246178 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745000103181 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667867842954 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136219984496 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475978046271 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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