Violence in the media promotes violence in society to what extent do you agree or disagree
It is often argued that media promotes the violence in society nowadays. I completely agree with this aforementioned statement and I also explain the negative impact before the conclusion.
To commence with, the main impact of social media in this contemporary era, mostly people influence and they copy which saw on the social media. To explain it, individuals follow their "apple of eyes" actors actresses as well as artist blindly. but when they totally copy to them they change their behaviour as well as personality. For instance, when some thrillers and criminality programs telecast on media platforms then alternative are influenced by social media and also try it in their daily life. As a result, promote the criminality and become aggressive.
Furthermore, the strengthening to my view point the second effect of media is that is also a way to increase terrorism, because sari reasons also use social media apps such as a Facebook,Twitter, WhatsApp and so on and on the other words, terrorism brutally promote region as well as other culture. To epitome, they create a chance to violence through these social media apps as well as TV programs, such as a bomb blast. Hence, people fight with each other about their religion and culture.
To recapitulate, I believe that now media is also responsible for terrorism, criminality as well as the caste discrimination in community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19383259912 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02084460779 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8518429745 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.181818182 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169171760698 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759910961373 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981365702495 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117356836148 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793190097568 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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