As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
new Roman","serif"">Whether students should spent on time living in another country is a matter of controversy. Some people believe that contact with a new culture in order to develop myself. While others claim that this can wreaks havoc on to local culture. I partly agree the statement on the following grounds.
new Roman","serif"">The ideal of living in another society proves appealing to youngsters. they are feel happy and comfortable when contacting with new culture which they used to have conquer dream it. however, because it is different about lifestyle, language and customs make for them feel shock, confused initial after impacting it.
new Roman","serif"">Thanks to learning in foreign not only do students educated in new studying environment, plent of teaching method are used on the contrary scholarb also can enrich knowledge for me through international friends and teachers. By contrast, education in a unusual environment is culprit of students can not keep up with teach method, do not understand this lesson lead to is fed up with in learning and can dropout. Take my brother as a telling example, due to learning program in Canada over heavy. So, my brother returned to the country without completing the course.
new Roman","serif"">By virtue of experience in a new customs pupil have the opportunity to advanced and learn culture in the world. Besides, they can put advertisement national image on the map with friends international. however, this exerts negative impacts on nation’s fine cu storms.
new Roman","serif"">In conclusion, I partly support with the above issue. Although living in a different country helps enrich knowledge, promulgates national image, this can endanger his father’s way of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86029411765 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.71352864717 2.80592935109 204% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8888870652 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142618632488 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510172151607 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390225190561 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090715648829 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461370787688 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.41 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.