You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dir Sir/Madom,
I have gone through your magazine dated 2021-08-02, the 33rd edition of 2021. I would like to thank you to your team on providing space on my town under the article “next destination” as this could help to encourage tourism to my country.
However, I have seen some errors on information published under the article paragraph 3, which described about the cannel Yoda ela. Actually the archeological value of this man made cannel was due to the technology behind that as you described but the slop should be corrected as 1inch to the kilometer length.
As I know, this is very impossible engineering task and shows the technology what we had on that era. Therfore, it is highly appreciate if you can di the correction on this enginnering parameter. I suggest to do the coorection with rebublishing the same content on your next publication volumn.
I rally thankfull to your team again on publishing the details and do some corrective action on the same to eliminate the wrong interpretation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...had on that era. Therfore, it is highly appreciate if you can di the correction on this en...
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Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest doing'.
Suggestion: suggest doing
...ection on this enginnering parameter. I suggest to do the coorection with rebublishing the sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95321637427 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99912781002 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.7074025269 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210444423692 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783562394278 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534853834192 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11188274236 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419365914331 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.