Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant.
Environment issue is a difficult challenge to every country in the world. Therefore, governments and many organizations are making strong efforts to deal with this problem. However, not only do these institutions take responsibility for protecting the environment but also every single person should take action to save our environment.
People have many choices to improve the environment by themselves. Firstly, the easiest way for everyone to protect the environment is throwing the rubbish in the right places. Many images taken on the beach or at famous places showed that people threw a ton of litter and wastes in the sea and on the grass. So, people should be aware of the place where they can put the garbage, or else, they can take it home then throw it instead of other places. Secondly, another solution for the environmental issues that people should get rid of using nilon bag when shopping. There are different styles or shapes of a type of bag called canvas replacing nilon bag for people to utilize so that it is more convenient for people to buy things in the markets.
Protecting environment campaigns from governments and large companies cannot be successful without the support from the citizens. On the one hand, young generation receives a great education from their parents, their teachers and their older generations about many lessons of saving the environment. As a result, younger ones can create many plans and solutions for this hot issue then governments as well as organizations may implement their projects. Besides, when the citizens understand their roles in saving the environment, they will be the biggest force to launch those campaigns.
In conclusion, environmental issue is not the responsibility of any single person or government, every single person should give a hand and take charge of protecting the environment.
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- Many people believe that the public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their money on expensive hi tech media such as software DVD s or videos Do you agree or disagree 84
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant 73
- The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi tech media such as computer software videos and DVDs To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...or people to buy things in the markets. Protecting environment campaigns from go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18874172185 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90369409728 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2594610259 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152536536665 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515733423634 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353317356684 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842307059126 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315002025989 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.