Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only comments and large companies can make a difference what extend do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems become a worrying concern in this jet age of 21st century. Presently, it is claimed that individuals can not do much to improve ambience conditions, only higher authorities and big organisations have the power to ameliorate environmental conditions. Here, I would like to this discord with the given statement firmly.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to support my point of view. First and foremost, masses can adopt the approach of 3R stands for reduce, reuse and recycle in order to improve the environment. To make it clear, people can decrease the consumption of products and reuse the recycled products to curtail the amount of trash on landfill sites. This will surely reduce the emission of harmful gases in ambience which are emitted by waste material. Hence, individuals can contribute more to reduce environmental threats to a great extent by adopting this approach.
further emphasising on my point of view. People can reduce the usage of private vehicles to mitigate the problem of pollution. To demonstrate, nowadays, excessive consumption of private mode of transportation is a major factor which contribute to air pollution. Moreover, natural resources like petrol and diesel is at the verge of extinction due to this trend. Consequently, reduction in usage of private vehicle will surely play of phenomenal role to plunge the amount of air contamination and save a lot of fossil fuels. Apart from it, promoting afforestation is another predominant way by which people can contribute to improve climate conditions. For example, trees are reliable panacea to remove pollutants from soil, air, prevent soil erosion and flooding. Needless to say, civilians can improve climate problems by following the approach of plantation.
To recapitulate, undeniably, as regime and organisation have strong financial budget so they can implement various effective strategies to improve the environment conditions. However, I believe that the power of people should not be overlooked to save nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Further
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Suggestion: further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, look, moreover, so, apart from, for example, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41955835962 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08901272607 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583596214511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8474779517 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183147210354 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512628467743 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572032672208 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109048667956 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253977584307 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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