Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Taking up such extreme sports as sky diving and skiing has long been one of the most controversial issues among sports lovers. Some people declare their individual rights to get involved in any kind of sports they are keen on. The others, however, protest these sports for their danger and ask for a ban on them. I am in favor of the former viewpoint for the excitement and the sense of achievement extreme sports bring about.
To begin with, it cannot be denied that extreme sports offer their players great excitement. The supporters of the given idea claim that extreme sports are too hazardous to take up. Playing them may lead to serious injury, even death, for the players. Nevertheless, the hurt is unavoidable in any kind of sport. Yet, thanks to the advancement in their facilities and the strict rules of safety, the danger in these extreme sports are brought down. Consequently, by participating in these activities, the players free themselves from the worry about safety and stand a good chance of having a go at adventurous feelings that they may never get in such so-called safe sports as cycling and swimming. Therefore, there is no necessity to force a ban on them.
In addition, the sense of achievement is another merit of joining extreme sports. Individuals have the right to make up their own decision, including their choice of sports fitting their characteristics. Many youngsters nowadays lead an active life with involvement in new challenges so that they can satisfy themselves when their goals are fulfilled. Extreme sports are ones for them to show off their burning desire to conquer new things. That is to say, banning extreme sports means depriving the youth of chances to unwind themselves with a sense of triumph.
To recapitulate, it is undoubted that extreme sports are dangerous to some extent. However, there should be no ban on them since they can both excite their players and give them the feeling of achievement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
Taking up such extreme sports as sky diving and skiing has long been one of the mos...
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Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... may lead to serious injury, even death, for the players. Nevertheless, the hurt ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in addition, kind of, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93636363636 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70490660521 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5757132415 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234515242715 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830727290339 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614904907196 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162455253669 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344357644428 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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