Some people choose to watch films or other programs on TV alone rather than with others.
Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Watching movies or TV has become an activity which done alone for many people in recent years. This may seem favorable in terms of interruptions and choice of programs to watch, but it is a social activity that is beneficial if done as a group.
For many people it is more preferable to watch movies by themselves, since they can avoid any interruptions or discussions during the watching process. In fact, it can be pretty irritating when people keep asking questions while we are enjoying a program. However, this means that cannot discuss a good movie with a deep meaning after watching it. For example, some movies can have philosophical concepts which are difficult to digest for one person.
Another reason why people opt for doing this activity on their own is that choosing a program or film to watch can be easy. In other words, they can select any movie or show without agreeing with others. Actually, it can be a disadvantage, since they can choose something that wastes their time. A good companion can help to find a suitable and entertaining show to spend free time efficiently.
Understandably, many people want to watch movies alone due to some good reasons, but it is a social activity. This mean that it should be done with our friends and close relatives. Providing we do it without others, we are likely to lose our chance to socialize with them. The purpose of TV and films is to share entertainment and this entertainment is never complete in the party of one.
To conclude, even though it appears to be appealing for some, watching some kind of programs done is far from to be advantageous. I think, drawbacks of this are more significant than its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, in fact, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75767918089 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77396938924 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0291977342 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285600887205 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915240951227 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514297474311 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157649437721 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242806438967 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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