Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?
Indeed self-employed works are escalating rapidly in contrast to employment under an organization's or an entrepreneur. It is probably due to the pandemic situation or self-awareness related to higher education, salary issues and so on. It may lead to financial crisis increased suicide attempts and poor quality products.
Many people are interested to work independently through numerous start-up projects. Covid pandemic has a major role in this new trends, owing to the fact that people often get more time to spend with their ambitions and wishes. For instance, the surging number of vloggers and YouTube channels explains the wide range of self-employment. Similarly, higher academic performance often reluctant to work under an employer just as an employee. They thinks that it may affect their pride and prejudice. Minimal wages compared to their qualification and mild chances to enhance the qualities may lead some people to went out of the company to a comprehensive outside environment, like the owner of Byjus academy who work to wish independently.
However, there would be a detrimental effect on this phenomena to many people. Self employer frequently suffering from financial problems to meet their target level or attain their dreams. Financial support from banks and financial companies often collect large sum of money in terms of interest and commission. Such things may adversely affect the self employer to cope with the crises and surpass the crucial situations by an effective ways. People who have emotional weakness or lack of support may experience mental conflicts which may lead to suicidal tendency. Furthermore, lack of experience in particular field and trying to overcome the problems individually might be dangerously affect the product quality.
To sum up, excessive self-employment is a common trend nowadays. Even though this would be a major phenomenon in the real world, it would have many pernicious impacts on many self employers life and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an organization' or simply 'organizations'?
Suggestion: an organization; organizations
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
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Suggestion:
...hinks that it may affect their pride and prejudice. Minimal wages compared to the...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employers'' or 'employer's'?
Suggestion: employers'; employer's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, for instance, in contrast, in particular, in contrast to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40514469453 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02917100987 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620578778135 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3978484473 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8823529412 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284472275715 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823852423492 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654354795156 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177713449854 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613443179968 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.