Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
In recent years, there are some people who assert that living in rural areas have many favorable conditions to lead a healthy lifestyle, whilst those with the opposing view argue that it is beneficial for individuals ‘ health to settle in urban areas .I am going to examine this question from both perspective and explain why I prefer to the former opinion.
There are many culprits why living in the cities have some health advantages. Firstly, cities have modern infrastructure and the quality of life is higher than countrysides. Hence, they can have an opportunities to take part in a variety of sport clubs and be given professional advice in counselor centers to enhance their health. Moreover, cities dwellers readily access state-of-the-art medicine and equipment to help them recover from illnesses. For example, residents who live in the countryside are more likely to go to the hospital in the cities to when they have a serious sickness.
On the other hand, although living in rural areas has several difficult conditions , to some extent, its benefit for people’s health is undisputed. Initially, the atmosphere in this place is fresh and contained less CO2 emission than that in the cities. This is because the majority of citizens dwelling in the countryside earn a living by growing plants and feeding livestock, thus they do not suffer from high risk of respiratory diseases. Additionally, there are not many trees and space for individuals to have a comfortable life. For example, because of the overpopulation in the cities , the residents there mostly live in a flat or a cramped house and the quite a few of trees are cut down to build house. This increases the sense of stuffy and pressure.
In conclusion, I believe that both point of view have their merits. However I am prone to the advantages of living in the countryside noy only because it have the fresh air but also there are a lot of tree and large space for people to live at ease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88358208955 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81125284934 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3473645279 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305467424016 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097660644664 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741355539183 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181628008948 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345713670374 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.