Nowadays computers are widely used in education. As a result, some people think teachers no longer play important roles in classrooms. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Obviously, we are entering the new upheaval for the fast-developing technology era that’s the reason why the computer has a far-reaching impact in every field, especially education. People claim that the importance of teachers in the classroom had been faded away and replaced by computers. In this essay, I will point out some reasons why I don’t agree with this.
Though computer brings so many benefits and convenient things to the students such as giving them a great sense of being active in learning by themselves, the best method for them to be used to working with computer in early age and they can access the information easily and fastly. Nevertheless, all of these things have some pitfalls if they’re not under the teacher’s monitoring. In addition, in the creative courses, it’s massively hard for students if they don’t have someone to guide and motivate them.
Students are too young to understand clearly about knowledge related to society or career orientation that computer couldn’t give them the decent things while the world is changing in the rapid succession. Moreover, students who are in the teen’s period could have many struggles with mental health issues and need someone those have the experience to tell and turn for advice. Teachers who had been trained, have solutions to cope with these students’ problems in a suitable way.
To sum up, notwithstanding we are being in the burgeoning of techs and computer is an essential portion for us, education is no exception, the role of teachers is still immensely crucial for students that the computer may not be matched for some jobs.
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Suggestion:
...puter may not be matched for some jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09701492537 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80377613494 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0048483068 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135792220195 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545960360621 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495072143365 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866586737787 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446496051206 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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