Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this given statement?
There is an opinion asserting that individuals are now exposed to more choices compared to the past. I, for one, entirely agree with the given statement on the basis of some compelling reasons.
To begin with, there exist manifold versions of everything in this contemporary era, be it something to buy or what to study at educational centers. On an individual level, in contrast to decades ago which people were bound to choose from one or two options, more manufactures and industries have been created, and in turn, their productions vary significantly. For this reason, nowadays when people are inclined to buy any clothes, for example, they are prone to too many alternatives in forefront shops, as well as shopping malls, and online stores. In terms of education, the increased number of colleges and universities make it quite difficult for prospective qualification seekers.
In addition, another compelling argument that why we have too many choices today is concerned with marriage. In the past, the last number of our chances to meet a so-called partner were limited to people in our neighborhood or amoung our relatives. In today’s modern time, however, there is no boundary for meeting people due to the advent of technology and its social network applications available to anyone. Therefore, not only is it much more convenient to find a date online, but also there are huge number of candidates to give it a try with. Needless to say, although we have more alternatives to choose today, which may sound a positive development at first, it can lay the groundwork for the emergence of some negative features in one’s characteristics. Being indecisive, taking a second guess all the time, and not being satisfied with what we currently have are the most salient illustrations in this respect.
In conclusion, I firmly believe it is totally true that we are living in a time that we are bombarded with different choices every day. In spite of the fact that this modern phenomenon may bring some positives, the downside of this common practise should be considered as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oices today is concerned with marriage. In the past, the last number of our chance...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r neighborhood or amoung our relatives. In today’s modern time, however, there is ...
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Line 3, column 869, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...g satisfied with what we currently have are the most salient illustrations in this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03170028818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92508482273 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605187319885 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0564325264 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308494746119 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093156593943 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701644012156 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175545767573 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208604939569 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.