Some people think that the best way to gather information is through newspapers while others believe in other better ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays we have many source of information, such as internet, radio, magazine, tabloid, catalogue, and newspapers. Some people argue that the best way to get information is by reading newspapers, even though others consider to receive different ways.
People which have studies background filtered information properly, they usually observe the source of information. They will read information from newspapers, magazine, or tabloid. The validation of message is being essential. However others argue that they can gather information in other better ways, for example from their friend or social media.
Public in this era are often facing false information, this situation make people be more collective to trust when they get any massage from other. When hoax is secatered people have to separate the false information and the truth information. Although in modern era we can give the actual fact and real information in media like TV, Radio, and Newspapers, sometime they also send the wrong information to the public. And this mistake is reasonable, because reporter or journalist is also a human that able to make any mistake.
Philosopher and also as Researchers, Rocky Gerung form University of Indonesia said. “ Rise your iq, and hoax will be decreased”. This statement demand people in this era being more sensitive with information that they get. No matter the information from newspapers or other source, people still have to be selective and always checking the new news which come.
In conclusion I should say that information tend to be wrong, consequently people have to be selective and always checking the news that they accept.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sources'.
Suggestion: many sources
Nowadays we have many source of information, such as internet, radio...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider receiving'.
Suggestion: consider receiving
... reading newspapers, even though others consider to receive different ways. People which have stud...
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Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tered information properly, they usually observe the source of information. They ...
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Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...lidation of message is being essential. However others argue that they can gather infor...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
... Although in modern era we can give the actual fact and real information in media like TV, ...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...formation tend to be wrong, consequently people have to be selective and always c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32442748092 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84157421586 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.299617384 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19638811591 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671361100875 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698654044256 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1156355429 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439890920407 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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