Some think that employers should ensure a supportive and pleasant work environment where each employee is respected and valued equally while others think employers should focus instead on providing better facilities and equipment. What is your opinion?
On one hand, if employees are satisfied with their jobs, the productivity of their work would be increased, which then happend to have the rise in the money companies could get. First of all, if someone is recognized by others for their hard work, it will inspire that person to work harder in the future. Second of all, receiving respectfulness and love from colleagues. In other words, it will create a group of plenty of passionate, hardworking, and experienced people. Nevertheless, gregariousness at work is truly the best way to solve all the difficulties. For example, Apple or Toyota used to be a small start-up companies and having problems with the lack of equipment but with the effort of all the employees, they have developed into famous global companies like nowadays.
On the other hand, spending a lot of money just to improve the facilities is a gamble. The reason is that there isn’t anything guaranteed that those risks would be paid off. For example, the Dream Program had spent nearly a hundred million dollars on “47 Ronin” for perfect animation and background but the film ended up only getting back just half of the capital because of lacking passion and professionalism in the acting skill of the actors. Furthermore, even the most passionate employee would easily feel bored and get tired of work if they don’t find it happy to work in the present environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, for example, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92372881356 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81035400429 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635593220339 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6130017876 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0779068920217 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033090814429 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231806161644 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590184288809 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00931882656951 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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