Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
Over the past decade, the worldwide connection has become a prevalent and publicly recognized phenomenon. While ample evidence suggests that a country can lose its unique culture due to the international connection, I would argue the opposite is true. To prove this, both sides of the argument will be discussed.
On one hand, a variety ranges of civilizations around can easily change or impact the original traditions. In other words, that country will become mixed and lose its uniqueness. For example, the authentic Americans are the red tribe, but the immigrations had come and nowadays most of the population of the U.S are not native and so do the lifestyles. What is more, because there are too many international products so nobody buys domestic stuff. As proof, Bphone, which is a Vietnamese phone brand, had died in Vietnam because Apple and Samsung were too famous and popular.
On the other hand, for those people like me who love to learn and discover new knowledge, cultural exchange is a golden opportunity and a great experience to broaden our minds. This is because, in an environment full of foreigners, both the native and non-native can learn about the other’s languages, traditions, and other new things. Moreover, a specific area can only grow some plants and animals, however, with the import and export people can buy the products from all around the world, which is very convenient for their life and it is also true with other good. For instance, many health types of equipment and vaccines from the U.S.A which were imported to India had saved millions of children and the elderly.
In conclusion, I have discussed both views and given my opinion. Although an international contract can cause fad in traditional cultures and affect badly to the products, I still think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because of the knowledge and better facilities it provides.
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... of equipment and vaccines from the U.S.A which were imported to India had saved ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07006369427 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79864377765 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633757961783 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9618653719 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101971655677 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341168097017 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442710580583 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647754240551 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510886380037 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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