Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
Business and cultural contact are the two things that are hard to separate because sometimes business activity includes cultural values in the process. This essay will discuss the positivity of business and cultural contact between nations and the concern about the disappearance of national identity in the contact.
I stand by the view of the positive impact of doing business and culture internationally can enrich our opportunity to explore more about our self-potency as an entrepreneur and the potential our nation has. In this fast-growing technology era, we witness numbers of chances are open for our local business to widen their customer range with the help of advanced online marketplaces such as multi-national e-commerce companies e.g Shopee, Zalora, Amazon, Alibaba, etc and it is a great thing that ever happens to them. Business and cultural contact are inevitable in international trades.
The thought of losing national identity while doing international trade is absurd. I personally think that the disappearance of national identity is merely a negative mindset made by the parties that don't have a strong belief at his/her country. Besides, if we, as an actor in business we need to have principles before swimming into a bigger pond so that we can survive the cruel world we call international society. I do think going global needs a higher capital, but the goal is set and all we have to do is an act, as long as we don't lose sight of who we really are I think we can conquer the global market.
To summarize this, I view this business and cultural contact issue as a positive way of enriching our experience in the global scope.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...gative mindset made by the parties that dont have a strong belief at his/her country...
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Suggestion: don't
... we have to do is an act, as long as we dont lose sight of who we really are I think...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, really, so, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01444043321 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88881759703 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563176895307 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9824976068 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.9 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289076581575 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135813200823 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102888881851 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189163004347 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948224679017 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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