In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In modern day, although there are more health care service with the development of technology and society, millions of people worldwide are now outweighted and they also have to face the increasing of health problems. There are some reasons behind the phenomenon and several solutions should be adapted to tackle the problem.
On the one hand, there are two primary reasons why many people are obese and their health become worse. Firstly, many people have unhealthy diet. Fast food gain polularity in many countries and people more likely prefer it instead of traditional food using nature ingredients. The mass-produced food, junk food seems to be a more appealing to people cause it's convenient and saving-time despite knowing it's hamrful. And this is a major factor which make the weight of people increase. Secondly, because of development of technology, the number of private vehicles increase rapidly and people don't have to go to work on foot or by bicycle. Moreover, modern people also are too busy on working, they usually sit in the front of desk for hours and don't have enough time to do physical exercise. This is one of the prominent reason why people are easier to be obese and suffer from health deterioration.
On the other hand, some measures should be considered to solve the problem. People should set up healthy diet and limit the consumption of fast food which include high cholesterol and chemical additives. The advertisement of unhealthy and unclear origin food should be baned. Having healthy diet not only help people avoid health disease but also make the average weight of people decrease. In addition, building and work office should construct fitness facilities where employees can work out after workship. This will help people not waste time to go to fitness centre. Besides, people also should use stair to go to floors under 5th floors, the elevators should be only used for higher floors on the building.
In conclusion, unhealthy diet and sedentary lifestyle seems to be major reasons for worsening in people's health. And some measures should be used to solve the problem that modern people have to face nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05056179775 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56576176656 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525280898876 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3385757966 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6315789474 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225676762615 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079602287923 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506672112878 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155456790454 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256373278831 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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