Films can have an effect on children’s education and teach them many things. Do you think it is always a positive influence?
movie plays an important part in our life. there are more and more oppinions related to films, especially about the effects of them on young children. In my perspective, movies has both side which is negative and positive.
On the one hand, watching film helps children learn more about the world around us. For instance, the documentary films maybe make children excited about history about the country where they were born or other countries. In history class, students can see their subject through movies, which leads them intrigued for hours on end. Beside, movies also enhace their imagination about the world that we are living. Comedy films, fiction films are some types that help boost their imagination. After busy and tired days at school, they can let their hair down just by watching movies.
On the other hand, many present films have the violation scenery, which has a lot of disadvantages on childrens' life. they are too young to regconinze the bad things that they should not do if we do not teach them.The worst thing that children do is immitate the dangerous actions in the film which they are watching. And some bad situations have happened just because of copying frightening sceneries. Apart from that, thesedays, there are more trash film with tedious plot, which is a waist of time if they keep watching it.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that somehow films still help us teach children many things about love, sharing, the right in life and so on. But we should supervise carefully on the movie that they watch.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89694656489 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37097872619 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4197808652 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23357131595 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697798396353 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636228205467 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139162260219 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525870707194 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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