Universities should take the same number of men and women in each major. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that every department in college should accommodate the same amount of both male and female students. I agree since this will support gender equality and broaden cross-gender perspectives.
Gender equality could be accomplished if the university applies the same number of both men and women in the class, leading to less discrimination occurring to one of the genders. As the numbers are the same, no gender will feel superior to others merely because they outnumbered the other. For instance, a study done by Yale University towards their all departments found that there was a 30% higher chance for women to be the head of student council in the department that has the same amount of both female and male compared to the imbalance one. This is because they believe both genders have the same capability to lead.
Adding to that, the same number of both men and women students could broaden both gender perspectives regarding collaboration. This is caused by the constant exchange of perspectives done by both genders while discussing in class, cultivating deeper understanding and respect for each other. This trains them to coexist well with each other in the future. For instance, most women can not function well went the period come. However, 7 startup founders came up with menstrual leave as a special regulation for their women worker. Those 7 founders have been found to go to the same MBA major in the university that has the same amount of both female and male students in the class.
In all, gender equality and a better understanding of each gender can be accomplished if the university allows the same number of male and female students in each major. This can be started by advising the authority to create its regulation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97972972973 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73052403482 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493243243243 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0481106244 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239054887015 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918419654563 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426696441033 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155522458636 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366391768899 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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