Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Now a days, Most of the parents enroll their children at school for their holistic development. however, a few people suggest that pupils should be taught at home which leads to overall development of pupils. while i believe that studying at home has some merits, many potential downsides are also attached to this trend.
On the one hand, there are several benefits of teaching children at home. first of all, if children will be taught at home by guardians, they can get more personal attention that is important for effective learning. Moreover, an educator sometimes fail to teach every child personally because he/she teaches a large number of students at same time. Second of all, Level of intelligencg and grasping power is vary among students. A teacher, for instance, is not able to teach all students with same teaching style. Therefore, weaker students could be infused better at home in order to build creativity and imagination power that would result in a higer confidence and super intellectual power.
On the other hand, while the phenomenon homeschooling has some advantages, it also leads some drawbacks that can not be. Ignored. first of all, teaching at home can provide a child with better environment ; however, there are some traits such as discipline, sharing things with other and participating in school competitiona and activities plays an significant role and must be learnt by children. Additinally, At schoold pupils learn how to help other students and behave with other people in school and siciety. because of all these things it is better for children to go school.
To conclude, studying at school has far more benefits that than at home even though children get a personal attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10600706714 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73372580818 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6680819777 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353766608988 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128363482851 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575189642367 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21788002448 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456731252324 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.