Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released.
Why is this the case?
What can be done to solve this problem?
Suggested by criminologists and experts that the number of returned convicts who continue committing wrongdoings is alarming. There are a variety of explanations for this trend and several solutions could be adopted to alleviate the problem.
Recidivism occurs after the prisoners are released for some reasons, chief of which is the uncertainty in deterring and educating offenders to avoid illegal activities in the prisons. The rehabilitative measures, generally, are often used for the most lawbreakers to instill in them the grave consequences of their actions and gear them towards ethical behaviour. However, to some particular individuals, those forms of deterrences are not strong enough to influence their mental determination to engage in crime again. Additionally, corporal torture in jails or humiliation, for instance, could sometimes intensify fued or have an adverse impact on their health instead of educational purposes. Consequently, during the reintegration process, the convicts would perpetuate crime as a form of revenge to the law system.
Undoubtedly, the authorities should take steps to tackle this problem. In an attempt to reduce crime incidence, stricter punishments must be administered to deliver tangible results. By doing so, the power of the judicial system and law enforcement could be reinforced and upholded to a higher level. For example, once the death penalty or life sentence is adopted to a criminal, the other will subconsciously have a sense of fear and aware of their behaviours. In the meantime, the police department and federal agency should also dissuade potential criminals, which could directly result in a reduction in the volume of crime had the tendency of committing wrongdoings were eliminated.
To conclude, illegal activities are reoffended often out of complex motives and steps should be taken into thorough consideration to ensure the order of society as well as the safety of the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15224082554 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2177074603 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.846153846 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144376176409 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049511828695 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439251660882 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087314452601 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575229026897 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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