In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Lately, more people prefer to read digital books than printed ones. As this will be more environmentally friendly and efficient to carry, a better life overtakes the demerits.
People choose to read e-books as it is considered as it is safer for the environment. By digitalizing books, there will be less paper printed, leading to less tree logging. Although it is good for the environment, people are prone to suffer eyesight problems due to staring at screens for too long. However, this can be tackled by using advanced screen technology that protects the eyes from blue light. For instance, the survey done by Greenpeace in 2019 found that there was an increase in tree logging numbers for up to 10% in Indonesia after the authority came up with the regulation of putting school compulsory books in digital.
Efficiency while commuting is also the main reason why people choose e-books over paper books. As all books are put into one portable device, their bags would be more lightweight. Even though it is more efficient to only bring one device, there is still a threaten for a pickpocket to steal and make all the books disappear. Nevertheless, this issue can be solved by inventing cloud storage for e-books that enables users to access their e-books from a different device. For example, a study conducted by Amazone Kindle in 2020 towards 300 high school students in Oklahoma found that they were more comfortable carrying an e-book to a school than the printed one as it makes their bag feels lighter.
To conclude, having to be more environmentally friendly and efficient to carry are the plus points of for people choosing e-books rather than the printed ones. It is suggested that both e-books and printed ones be provided more in book stores.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...o only bring one device, there is still a threaten for a pickpocket to steal and make all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93624161074 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64406746199 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1435185142 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328228693308 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140964557069 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101664661902 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240835055744 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822171621405 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.