the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011

Essay topics:

the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The given line chart illustrates the number of questions sent to the tourist information office in an urban area in the period of six months in 2011.

Overall, it is clear that the figure for inquiries sent via telephone decreased, whereas the opposite trend was seen in the others. Additionally, the number of questions made directly was higher than the two remaining after the march.

In January, the figure for inquiries sent by telephone was the highest, at about 900, compared to nearly 800 and over 400 in the quantity of questions sent directly and by letter or email, respectively. From January to March, the figure of questions made directly gradually increased, before dramatically increasing to approximately 1900 in June, leading to becoming the majority of questions in the office.

Meanwhile, the number of questions via telephone fluctuated between 800 and 1000 in the first four months, followed by a clear increase to 1600 in the end. At the same time, the number of questions via letter or email gradually decreased to about 400 and stabilized until the end.

Votes
Average: 7.5 (7 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06703910615 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79464771768 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7485549872 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117540315452 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646043496916 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10646295738 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101538001679 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128147239948 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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