The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city center is from 2003-2012
The diagram illustrates the changes in three various areas of crime in Manchester city center,during 9 years(2003-2012). Overall,mostly common crime,starting from 2003 is car theft.It is the highest one in given illustration and even raised until 2012.Moving to burglary,it had a boom in 2004 and decreased noticeably in 2008 and has not changed.Robberry,had a little fluctuation in the same year. Starting from car theft,it is one of the most popular crimes in Manchester and make up to 2,000 from 2003 until 2009 and had a boom in 2010,making up to 2,500 and has not changed until last year (2003-2012).With the comparison of all of given statements it is the highest crime in city center of Manchester. Moving to burglary and robbery,the former had a boom in 2004 reaching roughly the highest point of a diagram,but fell noticeable in four years to 1,000 and stayed rapidly.Robberry,is the lowest among two statements,it has not even changed,it had a little flactuation and stayed,making up to 500.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1226993865 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63988303954 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.152396548 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 208.75 112.824112599 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.75 22.9334400587 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2513044208 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197766966909 0.103423049105 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162618593333 0.0843802449381 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2513044208 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.2329268293 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.