Some people think that success is measured by how much money a person has. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The idea that wealth serves as a measure of success is with what I completely part company for a number of reasons.
Firstly, from an academic point of view, how successful one is might be measured by the qualifications they have acquired. While I concede that money has a part to play in some cases like tuition fees, the problem is that widely recognized qualifications require profound knowledge, experience and skills. Take IELTS for example. Candidates are forced to channel much time and energy into obtaining the very aptitude to get to the level where they are considered to be successful.
Employment is another indicator of being successful. Many supporters of material possessions may claim that money often leads to a better job. However, I would argue that when candidates are interviewed for a vacancy at a big company, how much money they have are not taken into consideration. What matters for them is how suitable they are for this position, which means they must meet the requirements of the job on offer. So, in many cases, being able to find a well-paid job might be the measurement criterion of success.
The final and most important area where success is not measured by how much money a person has is sport. I believe how successful a sportsman is has nothing to do with how much material wealth they have. To succeed in this, they have to train hard to be at their best performance, thus sacrificing their time and energy, not money. Were they to be rich to gain success, most of the globally recognized faces might go unknown. I, therefore, maintain that what athletes achieve contributes to their success.
To conclude, although some may consider money as an indication of success, I would argue that degrees and diplomas, highly-paid job, and achievements in sport are true measurements of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, most of the globally recognized faces might go unknown. I, therefore, maintain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in many cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91290322581 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83471309572 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7819862501 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254652983683 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869983301472 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737991239914 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146954152022 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508223938419 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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