Television dominates the free-time of too many people.It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Tv is considered to be the best time killer of many and it is believed that Tv is highly to change people into idle and introvert.I totally agree with this point of view and believe that people should spend their time doing useful activities like going to gym rather than watching tv.
To commence, being passive sort of person and sitting in front of screen lead to several physical and psychological problems in most cases.Firstly, blood circulation is disrupted on people who sit and do not move anywhere whole day turning one channel into another one and watching soap operas.As a result people gain extra pounds and it causes the obesity.Secondly,inaction hours of watching tv can harm people’s psychology.Most of the time aggression is caused by thinking only about tv series and people start responding aggressively to family members once they are interrupted.To prevent this I believe that people must be a member of gyms since it helps them stay healthy.
Furthermore,people can start isolate themselves even in one family.Every member wants to watch their lovely shows and they each have own television in their rooms.They do not see each other and want communicate with.This leads to worsening the interactions between people and isolation makes society less interactive.Moreover I believe that parents would not have enough time to bringing up their children right if they get addicted to TV.As a result, distrusting members that can even become criminals in future ,appear in society.
By way of conclusion,people should start paying much attention to the activities which they do on a regular basis.Otherwise sitting only in front of TV screen ruins their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, sort of, as a result, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20220588235 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30896854257 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 198.349439122 49.4020404114 402% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 353.75 106.682146367 332% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.0 20.7667163134 327% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236446577237 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134640312335 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486113711304 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134640312335 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486113711304 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 13.0946893788 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 50.2224549098 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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