Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Some people suggest that the circumstances of a crime and the reasons for committing it should be taken into consideration when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The idea of punishment for crime is a debit the first side of which advises that doing so had better be fixed punishment for any crime, no matter what his or her situation is. However, the second side insists on considering the factors required for the culprit. while the latter seems to be more logical, both points of view will be discussed as follows.
Those who support the notion of introducing terms and conditions associated with punishment for crimes cite that this depends on a number of factors two of the most important of which could be counted as mental health and age. this means that teenagers do not have much experience in lite. It is possible because of their age; they get into a big problem. In this case, they may fight with friends or classmates outside of the home and hurt each other, which happens a crime. In addition, it is very common When a person using drugs Loss his or her mental balance. an addicted person may be stealing something from a store or hurting somebody. It is because of his mental problems. hence, to make a decision about the punishment of a specific crime, judges must consider the circumstances in crime looking place.
on the other side of this debate, the proponents of the perception of making certain punishments for each type of crime claim that if so, all of the culprits are equally punished for the same crimes. However, this type of judgment could cause injustice in the execution of the rule.
In colocation, with respect to the controversy over whether the penalty for each type of crime should be the same or depending on the circumstances, the former seems debunked in my opinion due to the situation of the anybody is not the same with others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66556291391 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55475754346 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2552705692 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332063398204 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948416099524 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815736646802 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202086363322 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523890578983 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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