Business Managers spend a lot of money on advertisements. Do you think the ads are necessary for businesses to succeed? Provide specific details to the question.
These days, it is imperative for business owners to spend a tremendous sum of money towards publicizing their products. Honestly, I believe that putting a lot of money towards advertisements is very crucial for the continuity of a business. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will develop in my body paragraphs.
To start with, commercial advertisement attracts more customers, which in turn creates more buying power. Nowadays, there are many competitive products available in the market and this has eventually brought numerous businesses to an end. Therefore to ensure business survival, managers need to create awareness in newspapers, social media in order to raise sales for the company.For instance, the company making coca cola soft drinks no longer thrive in the markets, because there are thousands of brands presently available.Even though they were regarded as the number one brand, still people have really lost interest since the owner of the company stop making the drinks known to the public. If coca cola However, the company making fanta drinks have been flourishing among other competitors.They have been able to attract more customers not only by making frequent ads but also growing mouth referrals i.e people taking the product can easily make it known to others who are not aware.If the managers making the fanta drink hadn't been efficient towards making their products know to the masses, they would have close down by now.For this reason, it is certainly clear that ads play a crucial part towards continuity of a business.
Furthermore, spending excessively towards advertisement make its easier to meet people who will be willing to contribute immensely to the company.In fact, they would be eager to bring new innovations that could make the company looks exemplary among its competitors.For example, the managers of the fanta drink have been able to meet with food technologists from different parts of the world.These people were able to share some distinct recipe with the managers, and this has really been keeping the products alive.Besides, consumers now prefer fanta because of its uniqueness in taste.Based on this experience,I strongly feel that putting a lot of many in promoting businesses serve as opportunity to meet intelligent people that would bring positivity to the company.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that creating awareness for products helps businesses to stay alive.This is because it attracts more buyers, and also serves as a medium of meeting people that could bring in new ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, honestly, however, if, look, really, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29927007299 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85973275083 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54501216545 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 232.993138245 48.9658058833 476% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.0 100.406767564 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.6666666667 20.6045352989 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5555555556 5.45110844103 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154846800821 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814608984308 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483162956741 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111454710688 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539393963376 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 11.7677419355 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.1575268817 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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