Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, The world in twenty one st century is showing many of argument about some people want to keeping their classical cultivation, while other see that they can live without catching by their civilization because the Modern day don't need this culture.
The group who hang on his enlightenment think that there is no life without our habits bedew this is upbringing on this, However they forget it and don't care about their genesis if they will ignore it,so why their parents teached it for them and looked after by this customs, in additional that lifetime of this kind of persons depend on their lore, for example, in Egypt family Tell their daughter not to finish all of their glass of juice 100 percent because if she doesn't do that she can't marry in the future.
In otherwise, Human who don't suppose this subject that this traditional culture remained in the past and it is not important in their area of their life and much boring , Furthermore, they imagine that it restrict them and they can't live with this complication.
Finally to conclude this point we should respect our habits and keeping on it because we are growing up on this and this is my opinion, whereas people who think that our culture is not important it is a big mistake and they should to understand value of their cultivation.
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Suggestion: Finally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72173913043 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42693882203 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578260869565 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.975402291 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.5 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.5 20.7667163134 277% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.5 7.06120827912 333% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128014719137 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881436525681 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0156998838765 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881436525681 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156998838765 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.